lunes, 29 de junio de 2009

My bEsT fRiEnD !!!!!!

well my best friend is melissa millan she is 14 years old and she is studying in 9 grade with me. she lives in the neighborhood ciudadela with her grandmother. well she is a good person and i love that she is always with me when i need her help and supports me , understands me and most importantly she always has something nice to say me.we met one day in the school when i was studying in 5th grade .when she was reading a magazine and i also wanted to read so i decided to told her and she very kindly gave me the magazine and since that day we are the best friends.

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  2. Hi Andrea!!
    Good composition but i found some mistakes,for example,
    she has 14 years old:She is 14 years old
    always have something nice to say me:she always has something nice to say to me or to tell me
    i hope that my corrections are of great use to you..bye!!

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